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Melissa Lopez Covarrubias - The best gift I ever received

Prewriting- Brainstorming, Assignment #4

Brainstorming
-A valuable discipline or practice

1. Soccer
2. respect
3. responsability
4. basketball
5. baseball
6. boxing
7. Cardic Endurance
8. competivity
9. physical capibilities
10.. organization
11. injuries
12. equipment
13. games
14. olympics
15. abilities
16. outdoors
17. adventures
18. winning and loosing
19. trips
20. teams
21. new people
22. good figure body
23. running
24. sweat
25. tired
26. fields
27. new activities
28. american futbol
29. fights
30. new expiriences
31. more knowledge
32. future in sports
33. rules
34. healthy food
35. healthy body
36. values
37. different sports
38. physical endurence
39. more recognision
40. you enjoy of something that is healthy for you

That was the end of my brainstorming of the valuable discipline or practice that I am going to do with almost all the sports, mainly with soccer, american futbol, basquetball and baseball.

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Rosy Bojorquez Pacheco - A valuable discipline or practice

Uriel Eduardo García Sánchez - An important film (or TV show)

Walking (Blog Assignment # 3)

Walking

Once upon a time there was a girl so beautiful daughter of poor workers, but even with the kind of life they have, they were happy and love each other with all they heart. She know how to cook, how to make cloth and all that stuff. Her parents all the time were hoping to her to not have that kind of life, they want her to be happy in a big house with a rich husband. One day when she was 17th years old she go to pick up her dad in the job he have. When she arrived she noticed her dad talking to a young man, she noticed too that her dad was sad and have a box at his side, she inmediately thought that he was being fired, when the man look at her he smiled and said toher dad “But I can make you stay in the fabric with one little thing that only you can give me” and then the man turn to look at her, and she understand.. the man want her.

Days after she was getting ready to the wedding, it was all to soon but she can’t do anything to stop all, her dad of course declined what the man say but she know better, she had to help her family and she was the only one that can do it. Her parents always thought that she loved the man and that was the reason why she was doing all that, but she didn’t love him, she don’t even know him and she’ll never know she’ll regret what she decided all her life.

Years pass, she married the man who after two months made her move to another city away of her family, she never see her family again, but she know they’ll be happy because she let them a lot of money and a beautiful house to live, but she was so unhappy with the man and she made nothing to hide that, and other wise the man did love her at first he get tired of her not loving him and start hit her every time he kissed her and she just not respond.

She after years of suffering of the man beating her, and wishing to be death or just go away, she get pregnant, the beating of the man stopped, but he still treat her bad all the time, she hate him and was so scared of him too. One day when her daughter was born she decided she don’t want her baby girl to suffer what she suffer, and even thought her baby can live happy with all the money of the man, she knew the man one day was going to go away with the baby a let her alone and she can’t bear that to happen.

One day when her baby girl was 3 years old, she escaped, she walk and walk with the baby until she arrived to her natal town, she get a job to support her baby and she start looking for her parents on the town until she find them, she was so happy for the first time in a lot of time and her baby girl was going to have a happy live so all was okay. 

THE END

Road Blog Assignment #3

teacher!! I don't understand this blog!!! x3 I don't know if I'm right.
The Road
In summer time, many years ago, there use to be a couple that were, or at least that what they tought, that they were meant for each other. They completed each otther sentences, order for each other, even had the same bloood type, they knew everything about them. They really look like if they were meant for each other. He was planning to marry her and he planned everything really romanticly. The day she did it she was really happy, she said yes and went with her girlfriends to tell them, they were all excited. Then the guy had the worst idea, go to a road trip only with her, she said yes and prepared to leave in two days.

The day of the road trip came and and they were really excited. They went to Los Angeles, Las Vegas, San Diego and many other places. They had lots of time alone and played games on the car, but sometimes bored because they knew everything of each other so they couldn't talk that much. They had a lot of fun, visited little towns, meeting knew people and saw a lot of wedding planners. One day they saw a hospital and decided to donate blood. While they were being attended and all that, one of the nurses and took thei blood out, asked them if they were brothers, the girl laughed and said that no, the man just mad a kind of fake smile, the nursed just laughed and left. They continued their road trip back to home and she recalled what the nursed said and laughed, and looked at him and asked him what was wrong he said nothing and she insisted so 20minutes later he said that they were brothers. She was really scared and mad and disgusted because he knew and never told her anything and was asking to marry her knowing that. He tried to explian, but she was really mad. She decided he didn't wanted to talk to him and stop, and got him suit case out of the car and into the sand he went out to know what was she doing. She got into the car and left him in the road, she came home and didn't say a word about it to anybody.

The ad is subjecting a theme about merchancy and giving credit to Nike, for people would like to buy it.

The target audience is for teens, young people and athletes that would like to use them. 

The purpose is to make people love them and want to buy them using good techniques of merchancy.

I think the ad is succesful on reachins its purpose. 

drugs drag you doooooooooooooown!

this ad is about drugs and how affect in your life and how it kill you slowly while you are using it, the target audience is for teenagers but because the drugs are bad for everybody I think that the ad is to anyone, the purpose is to show the truth about drugs and the real end if you decided to use it, and I think that is successful..:)

TEACHER:  I'M MELISSA LOPEZ NO URIEL.. I'M IN HIS MAIL AND PROFILE AND ALL THAT BECAUSE I DON'T KNOW HOW TO ADD ME AS AN AUTHOR AND IF I'M NOT AN AUTHOR I CAN NOT POST ANYTHING.. AND UNTIL THE TEACHER CAN TELL ME HOW TO ADD ME I'M GOING TO POST THIS ASSIGNMENT IN THIS ACCOUNT, hope you don't want to kill me later uriel x)..

SUUUUITS :)

The ad is about COOL SUITS :) for apparently young "formal-work" men, those who work as lawyers or in high ranks in enterprises or an old man who is very interested in do whatever he want to do with a suit. The purpose is to sell suits, selling the image that is as comfortable as any clothe but with the elegant look of a suit, I don't really know if the suits are best sellers but i really want to buy one and do that :BB.

Assignment #1 Feedback...

Great job guys. Tadeo, you did fine, even if it wasn't really a "story," it was great. You all did wonderful and will get full credit, both individually and collectively. 

Keep it up!

Write the story

The first assignment from advanced writting...