Road Blog Assignment #3

teacher!! I don't understand this blog!!! x3 I don't know if I'm right.
The Road
In summer time, many years ago, there use to be a couple that were, or at least that what they tought, that they were meant for each other. They completed each otther sentences, order for each other, even had the same bloood type, they knew everything about them. They really look like if they were meant for each other. He was planning to marry her and he planned everything really romanticly. The day she did it she was really happy, she said yes and went with her girlfriends to tell them, they were all excited. Then the guy had the worst idea, go to a road trip only with her, she said yes and prepared to leave in two days.

The day of the road trip came and and they were really excited. They went to Los Angeles, Las Vegas, San Diego and many other places. They had lots of time alone and played games on the car, but sometimes bored because they knew everything of each other so they couldn't talk that much. They had a lot of fun, visited little towns, meeting knew people and saw a lot of wedding planners. One day they saw a hospital and decided to donate blood. While they were being attended and all that, one of the nurses and took thei blood out, asked them if they were brothers, the girl laughed and said that no, the man just mad a kind of fake smile, the nursed just laughed and left. They continued their road trip back to home and she recalled what the nursed said and laughed, and looked at him and asked him what was wrong he said nothing and she insisted so 20minutes later he said that they were brothers. She was really scared and mad and disgusted because he knew and never told her anything and was asking to marry her knowing that. He tried to explian, but she was really mad. She decided he didn't wanted to talk to him and stop, and got him suit case out of the car and into the sand he went out to know what was she doing. She got into the car and left him in the road, she came home and didn't say a word about it to anybody.