lunes, 2 de febrero de 2009

Write the story





The first assignment from advanced writting...

13 comentarios:

  1. I'm going to write the story from the third picture from up to down...

    There is something funny about people, they take first impressions from the outside of people, things, really from everything. They make general images just by it looks.

    Why have the "black" people be different from the "white" people? I think is more fault from the humans than the color, you know, that's obvious. If everyone in this world have the tolerance to survive with a different looking human, the world definitely would be better place to live, a little less barriers to fight with, but it is not like that.

    Every year is getting better and better the fact that we can live with anyone without any barrier, but there is no end yet, there still is people who hate different people, my question is why. Well, I think that is not that bad to hate someone that hurts you in a very hard way, but hate someone just for exist with his color, I only call that with one word, STUPID.

    Why isnt the world all together with no barriers? I don't know...
    How to get rid of those barriers? I don't know :SS

    well let's see of someone reads this...

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  2. That's not a story, but it has 3 paragraphs i think that is what counts ... xDDD

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  3. I loved your story Tadeo, it was great xD! ...
    Keep on doing that kind of stories jajaja
    Well, I don´t have anything else to say about that ...

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  4. yeah that's not a story
    but yet, it is good =]
    good job tadeo x)!

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  5. I choose picture 1

    Well, my story about this picture is that all that people are like having a lot of distant with each others, children, teenagers, and adults all are in their own bubble no interacting with anyone else, like if they think they don't need it..

    But then they realize that they always need to interact with someone like friends or family, and it's not because they are afraid to be alone, but because being social is very important, we can't even be an entire day without interacting with other people because we get crazy..

    Is good to be independent but they at the end realize and finally understand that they're always going to need someone else, even though that in the picture they seem to be apart they all in the same picture and in the same place and stay together in some way..

    I think that what I wrote is weird and I hope somebody will understand x)

    -melissa

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  6. tadeo..
    even though your comment is not a story it was good x)
    and you know I wanted to comment about that picture¬¬

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  7. http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_UvR1TN-PdCc/SYdfm1a5d6I/AAAAAAAAAA0/u-iETY81jx0/s1600/wts2.gif

    Well, I don´t know if you can see my picture, but is the second one, in which there´s a guy and the other one without a head...

    Once upon a time, in Africa there was a country where people was very skinny because of the lack of food. The only two families who had some money and lived good where the Mirán and Sinambre. Both families had each one guy, the one of the Mirán family was called Flatdumb and the one of Sinambre was called Negroiam. They were so united that people tought about them as brothers or as gay.

    Flatdumb and Negroiam were already 20 years old and lived a lot of adventures. They were both fat because of eating a lot and they started making some excercise for getting a better body. People in the country they lived, hated a lot these families because they were the only ones who had a good life and other guys of the age of Flatdumb and Negroiam started making problems with them.

    One day because of so many problems they decided to go away from home and one day they came back because they were missing the family and all that. When they arrived into the country, they noticed that it was totally inhabited and all people was death. They don´t had a way to go back to New York where they lived for all the other years, so they started to suffer hunger.

    Negroiam one day killed his friend Flatdumb because he was too hungry and cutted his head. He ate Flatdumb´s body for some months, that was really disgusting...

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  8. Melissa ... you are rich jajajaja xD
    and your story wasn´t that bad, I think you pay to someone to do it for you jaja xD ..
    See you teacher

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  9. I chosed the one that is in a box.
    Though I don't know what to write.

    There use to be a man that was really dumb and he was always trying to fit in and have friends and socialize, but everybody else just talked to him because he would do anything to fit in. Once they asked him to ride a bycicle and crash into a wall an he did. No matter what happened to him he still tryed harder and harder but he wasn't accepted and he knew that. Most of the nights he cryed and her mother talked to him. So one night they went for him and told him that they would be their best friends is he went for a swim, even they know that he couldn't swim and he did. He almost drown but his mother was after him checking on them and went and save him, he was on the hospital for a week. He was changed of school and didn't have friends or at least he tried to.

    Years later him being a business man really success full with lots of money, but no one to share with he became depressed and they went to a psychologist and fell in love of her. At the begginning she just dated him because she thought he was cute but didnt think of him as something serious, but later she just started falling in love with him. They were becoming something serious and he really like her and his mom was really proud. He was about to propose to her, but his mom started getting real sick and eventually died so he let proposing for later.

    A year later he was thinking of proposing and he was doing it, but receive a call from one of the girls that made fun of him in his old town, she wanted to meet him, he was okay with it. The day came and she asked sorry about everything that she had done to him, it started raining so they went back to his apartment and started talking and she kissed him! At that moment her actual future wife enter and got really pist of and sent out the girl of the apartment and you could hear yellings. She told him that the only way she will forgive him would be if he enter in a box and stayed there for a month. Then she left, he thinked about it the whole night and on the morning disappeared and she went to look for him.

    When they found him he was on a thin line about to died. He was again on the hospital and she was there with him and told him she was really sorry andthat she loved him, out of no were he pulled out a little blue box and told her she was everything he ever wanted and he was greatful for every moment with her, he gave her the box and when she open it she was really amazed and said that she will absolutley married him and kissed him. He smiled and then closed his eyes.

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  10. mm.. the thing of tadeo wasn't a story but it made me laugh :)

    I hated my story but I have been watching way to many soap opera or "novelas" I don't know if thats the way you write it.

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  11. I'm doing a story on de last picture from up to dwn.




    Once upon a time in a town call Kikapoo, there was a little guy.This little guy was called Bob. He aleays had to do the same routin over and over again; get up, dress, go to work, come back from work, take a shower and get to bed. he was boring and un happy.

    One night he got to bed thinking that he did everithing the same every day, he started thinking to do dings different. He did things a little diferent but he thought that wasn't good enough.

    The nex day he quited his job to go on a trip to see the world. He went to china, russia, Hawaii and many other places.
    He met a lot of people and had a lot of friends. He now was very happy and saw every day like a new adventure.







    (i didn't know what to write hat was the first thing that got into mi mind xD)

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  12. mm.. I don't know what I think about Lorena's story, but she had some mistakes :P

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  13. well, uriel's story was very funny xDD
    the names are very clear xDD

    in te melisa's story everything is so fast xDD
    i don't think i had understand.

    and in lorena's story :)
    i liked the center idea but she could have a better storyline after all

    GOOD joB EVERY ONE WE DESERVE 100 ;DD

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